[SOLVED!] Very short story in need of proofreading

Hi there!

I just wrote a very short story and I’d love to post it in The Gay Spiral. The problem is I don’t feel very confident about my English. Would anyone be interested on proofreading it? It’s only a little bit over the 1500 words so it shouldn’t take much time, specially for a native speaker.

I’m giving free virtual chocolate cookies in return :smiley:

happy to help you out

Hi there MalSkin! Thank you so much! Another kind sould sent me a DM a few days ago so tge story has been already proofread. But it was very nice of you, really!